Elle (theroadtoelle) wrote,

From verbose to succinct...

Prompt: Rewrite one of your existing poems.

Battered, bruised,

but upright,
I look down
to find

it was you
holding me up
all along.

This is a rewrite of #Support.
Tags: #support, poems, poetry, steve

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